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PostSubject: Tsumi Uchiha   Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:36 pm

Name:Tsumi Uchiha

Gender:Male

Village:Snow

Rank: Jounin

Age: 16

Height- 162 cms

Weight-50 kg

Element: Fire and Lightning

Summonings: Snakes and wolves

Bio: Tsumi was born in the snow village to a small family of uchihas. at the age of 12 he killed one of his best friends in order to gain the Mangekyou Sharingan. in the next to years he trained using the MS while no one knew he even had it. two years later on his 14th birthday 3 people learned that he had it...but died soon after. the people where his parents and his yunger brother. he killed his parents off easily but then he decided it would be fun to torture his little brother a little before ripeing out his eyes and claiming them as his own. do to the fact he was slowly starting to go blind. so on his 14th birthday he lost his family and gained the Enternal MS. it has been 2 years since he gained the EMS. in the past two years (from the age of 14 to the age of 16) he has copied many jutsu from other people and come to master some of the MS's genjutsu.

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Equipment: 35 kunai,35 shuriken,45 senbon,50 ft of wire, 5 Windmill Shuriken, and 1 Kusanagi (Grass Cutter)

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Strengths: Fast learner, very good at ninjutsu

weakness's: at times he acts with out thinking

Abilities: Fast learner

Bloodline: EMS
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PostSubject: Re: Tsumi Uchiha   Sat Mar 07, 2009 1:51 pm

finished....can some one accept or decline? please.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsumi Uchiha   Sat Mar 07, 2009 2:28 pm

Tsukyomi is more of a genjutsu, thus it is not a finisher, Kirin is a re-version of lightning element, so rasengan would not be capable since it is mostly wind chakra, you need Wind and ligthning for those two element. You may decide which one to choose. Approved but add some more jutsu, jounin have more then that of which you have. I do not wish to be difficult but if you want to have Mangekyou Sharingan you need to write a more descriptive bio on how you obtained it, As for Enternal Mangekyou i cannot approve of that. If you come from the land of snow you can be kage of it, seeing as how it is kageless, But if you are kage your element should be composed like this.

Element's:
Ice (Main)
Water (Secondary)
Wind (Secondary)

Also since you are a uchiha you can just have some fire jutsu, like 5 since uchiha naturally have Fire affinity.

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PostSubject: Re: Tsumi Uchiha   Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:51 am

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